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1 该图表显示了某市的地铁使用情况的调查结果。请根据表格所示，简述该地铁站在一天中各时间段的客流量变化状况。文章开头已经给出。 注意： 1. 词数：100-120字 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 参考词汇：最高峰---pea； 图表---graph Underground Station Passenger Numbers The graph shows the fluctuation(起伏，波动) in the number of people at an underground station over the course of a day. The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 3 pm the number rises, with about 300 people using the station. In the afternoon, numbers decline/drop/fall, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall sharply, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, dropping again after 9 pm. In a word, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning and early evening periods. 2 下图的图表反映了1997年至2004年我市市民主要联络方式的变化。请仔细观察，写一篇题为 “Letters Give Way to Phone Calls” 的短文。 number of people in thousands 要求：1．描述图表。2．简要说明变化的原因。3．字数120左右。参考词汇：图表 diagram Nowadays most people in our city do not communicate the way (or: as) they used to .As can be seen from the diagram ,the number of people who write letters has dropped from about 550 thousand in 1997 to150 thousand in 2004. Meanwhile ,the number of those who contact others by phone has risen from 100 thousand in 1997 to 600 thousand in 2004.This diagram shows that letters have been giving way to phone calls. In my opinion ,there are two main factors leading to this change .For one thing ,the widespread use of telephones makes it possible for people to change their traditional way of communicating ;for another ,letters can never be so convenient ,timely or direct as phone calls are in communication. 3 (04北京)某学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据中反映的情况写出你的一个看法。词数不少于60。 生词：图表chart Chart 1 shows the daily average amount of time the students of the school spend on different after-class activities. The students put the most time－93 minutes－into their homework, and next in line is watching TV, which takes up 46 minutes. They put in about the same amount of time listening to music and working on the computer, 34 minutes and 30 minutes each. While 25 minutes is spent on sports, only 12 minutes goes into housework. 4 假如你是高中三年级的学生张明，在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。 注意：1．信的开头和结尾已经给出。 2．词数100词左右。 Dear Editor, I am a Senior Three student．Recently we have carried out a survey—“To whom do you go when in trouble?” The main findings are as follows． 61% of the students surveyed select friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have trouble and want to confide, the reason of which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other．Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to．They suggest that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experiences．Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don’t share their troubles at all．They say that their troubles are none of others’ business．Others find it hard to converse with others． (It is not easy to reach definite conclusions based on such a small example．However, some general comments can be made．) It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and teachers and parents need to play a more important role in their lives． Yours sincerely, Zhang Ming 开头句：1) From the chart/graph/table/diagram /picture, we can see that…. 2) As is shown in the chart/graph/table/ diagram /picture,….. 3) As we can see from the chart/graph/table/ diagram/ picture,…… 5 .请按照下面所给的2幅图画的提示和所提供的主题句，用英文写一篇题为“Changes in My Village”的短文。 1． 开头已为你写好。3．词汇：砖厂 brickyard In the pas now Changes in My village Great changes have taken place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses of my village lay on the north of a lake. They produced much waste. As a result, the lake was seriously polluted. To the west of the village was a sandy field, which was the source of much dust whenever wind was blowing. Worse still, a brickyard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal of good soil. Now the poor houses have been replaced by green trees and the brickyard by tall buildings, The sandy field that the villagers used to plough has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake, now clean and clear, the villagers often spend their spare time boating and fishing. (In a word, my village has become a modernized and green one.) We are extremely happy about the changes in our village. 5 下面的图画反映的是少数中学生的一些不良习惯和违背社会公德的行为。请仔细观察自己命题写一篇英语短文，描写下述现象（可适当发挥），并就此谈谈自己的看法。 Nowadays some students have got into bad habits. In our daily life we can often see them throw rubbish here and there. Some don’t bother to turn off the taps after using running water and sometimes they leave the lights on when they are out. Some even say very dirty words in public, which has a bad effect on the others. It is bad manners to behave so. I hope everyone will obey the general rules in school. Never throw waste anywhere and keep the ground clean. We should try to save our running water and electricity. Above all, we should be polite to others. If we can give up those bad habits, life will be much better. . 假如你是中学生李涛，最近发现一些同学经常到学校附近的网吧（cyber cafe）。几天前，你也去了一次，发现了许多不良现象，请根据下面四幅图所示内容，给某报社会编辑写一封信，发表看法并提出建议。 注意：1、词数：100左右 2、开头已经给出。 参考词汇：因特网Internet 聊天chat 冲浪surf 在线的 online I’m a middle – school student named Li Tao. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I’ve noticed that many of my schoolmates often go to the cyber cafes near our school. The other day, I went there, too. I was surprised to see them playing computer games, seeing movies or chatting. Some of them were even talking about love affairs on line. In my opinion, a cyber café should be a place where we can find much useful information. Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than a place for games. Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will do us great harm. So the local government should take measures to make sure of the safety of us students in cyber cafes. Yours, Li Tao 7 书面表达（满分25分） 眼下，街头巷议，人们的热门话题总离不开“三贵”：买房贵、上学贵、看病贵。请根据下面图画，写一篇英语短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。题目自拟。 注意：1. 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整； 2. 词数：120左右。 It’s Time to Reduce Loads Nowadays it is often talked about that there are three things that people can’t afford．It is expensive to buy houses, to pay for the children’s education and to see the doctor. It is really true about this. As is shown in the picture, some people are burdened with these high expenses all their lives. Some people even get into heavy debt even though they work hard and make every effort to earn money or save every coin. Some people have to say good-bye to the doctor because of lack of money or they have a heavy debt load. In my opinion, the government should build up a perfect system to meet the basic need of living. The expense on houses, tuition and medicine should be cut down so that everyone can enjoy a better life. 8 书面表达：（满分25分） 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 注意：1. 短文应包括图中所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥，使短文内容连贯、完整； 2. 词数：120左右。 Health Care From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldn’t stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could afford． It’s really another heart attack for him. At present, many people can’t afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care or have to bear the pain of diseases. Worse still, some have to wait for the last day of their life. We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced． The government should build up a favorable medical system. Everyone could enjoy their life as long as possible. 9 假设你叫李华，你班同学参加了“二十一世纪中学生英文报”组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：城市内是否可以豢养宠物（狗和猫）。请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社投稿，介绍讨论情况，并说明自己的观点或建议。注意：.词数100左右。 反对饲养宠物的同学认为 支持饲养宠物的同学认为 1． 造成环境污染 2． 吵闹声，甚至伤人 1． 安慰孤寡老人 2． 人与动物和谐相处，增添生活情趣 模板1) Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should… 2) Some students think it's a good idea to… 3) Besides, … make…. 4) On the contrary, … are against the idea. 5) In their opinions, if … , it is bad for … 6) What is worse, … make … and… 7) I like … , so I don't think it's bad to … 8) But we must take some measures to… Recently we have had a heated discussion on whether people should keep pets at home in cities. Some students think it's a good idea to keep pets because many old people who live alone at home can get some comfort from pets. Besides, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. On the contrary, the other students are against the idea. In their opinions, if too many people keep pets at home, it is bad for the environment. What is worse, pets may make too much noise and even attack people. I like animals, so I don't think it's bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment. (1). 用于句首提出论题或现象的句型 ②…has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life . ③Nowadays there is a growing concern for … ④Nowadays it is common to hear /see … ⑩Nowadays … has become a problem we have to face . ①Recently , …has become the focus of the society . ⑥Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of … (2). 表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth． 2）People have different opinions on this problem． 3）People take different views of（on）the question． 4）Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．． 例如： People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers． （3）用于比较、阐述不同观点的常用句型 ②There are different opinions among people … Some believe … Others , however , hold a different idea. ③Some people claim that … Others , however , disagree with it . ④Some people believe … Others maintain … Still others claim … ⑤Some people suggest … Others , however , hold the opposite opinion . ⑥On one hand , people tend to … On the other hand , they feel … 1．表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this． 例如： There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life．Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved．Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like．Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life． 注：如考生写第一个句子没有把握，可将其改写成两个句子。 如：Great changes have taken place in our life． There are three reasons for this． 这样写可以避免套用中的表达失误。 （6）用于陈述个人观点/想法的常用句型或表示结论 ②In my opinion , we should attack more importance to … ③As for my own idea about … I believe … ⑤Personally , I prefer … ⑥In my view , both sides are partly right in that … ⑦But for me , I would rather … ⑨In conclusion , I support the statement that … 1）In short，it can be said that ．．． 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows． 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ．．． 例如：From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved． 注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的结论句；例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。 （8）用于结尾的常用句型 ①From what has been discussed / mentioned above , we may conclude that … ②Therefore , it is not difficult to draw / come to the conclusion that … ③It is high time that something was done about … ⑦It is clear , therefore , that … ⑨It is essential that effective measures (should) be taken to … ⑩From what has been discussed above , we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that … ⑾ In conclusion ,the most important is … ⑿ On the whole , it is high time that every one … ⒀ As a result , we should take some effective steps to … ⒁ Judging by the figures / statistics , it is not difficult to see that … ⒂ Only in this way, can the problem be really solved. (16)Only when everybody can do so will our world become more and more beautiful. 10 面对不断升温的中学生"出国热"，人们对此有不同的看法。请你以Studying Abroad为题，根据下面提供的信息，谈谈自己的看法。 注意: 字数120左右。参考词汇：mediator 媒介，中间人 Advantages Disadvantages 1. 传播各个民族间的不同文化。 2. 拓宽视野，学习国外先进的科学技术。 3. 良好的语言环境，更有利于语言学习。 1. 年纪偏小，自理能力差。 2. 远离父母，孤独，想家。 3. 生活、学习费用高。 4. 缺乏生活经验，易受不良人或物的影响，甚至走上犯罪道路。 模板1) In recent years, … has become more and more popular with… 2) Tens of thousands of… 3) In my opinion, there are many advantages to… 4) First, … Second, … Third, … 5) However, there are also some disadvantages. 6) … too … to … 7) Being … can make… 8) Also, of course it’s … than… 9) What’s worse, without… it’s easy for them to… 10) In a word, think it over before… In recent years, studying abroad has become more and more popular with middle school students. Tens of thousands of Chinese middle school students have gone abroad. In my opinion, there are many advantages to attending school abroad. First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediator between people of different cultures. Second, there is so much to learn about science and technology in foreign countries. Third, we can learn foreign languages more quickly. However, there are also some disadvantages. Many students are too young to take care of themselves. Being far away home can make you feel lonely and home sick. Also, of course it’s more expensive abroad than at home. What’s worse, without any experience of living abroad, it’s easy for them to make bad friends and be influenced to do stupid things. In a word, think it over before you make your decision. 2．表示好处 1）It has the following advantages． 3．表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages． 2) As we all know, every coin has two sides. It can also be harmful to…. 一二三原则 领导讲话总是第一部分、第一点、第二点、第三点、第二部分、第一点… 如此罗嗦。可毕竟还是条理清楚。考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。 1）first, second, third, last（不推荐，原因：俗） 2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推荐，原因：俗） 3）the first, the second, the third, the last（不推荐，原因：俗） 4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推荐，原因：俗） 5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（强烈推荐） 6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（强烈推荐） 7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（强烈推荐） 8）most important of all, moreover, finally 9）on the one hand, on the other hand（适用于两点的情况） 10）for one thing, for another thing（适用于两点的情况） ＂There be＂结构 考生病句： 1. There are many people like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables can be bought on the market by people. 正确表达： 1. There are many people who like to go to the movies. 2. There are different kinds of vegetables that people can buy on the market. 这两个例句的错误比较有普遍性，因为在历次考试中有不少考生不能正确运用there be这一最常用的句式。在这种结构中，there是引导词，没有实际意义。be在句中作谓语，有时态和数的变化。 例如： 1. There was no school in the village at that time. (=there was not a school...) 注意：在否定句中，否定词用no，也可用not a或not any。not a后接单数名词，not a 后接复数名词，no后面的名词单复数都可以。 2. There is not a moment to be lost. 3. There are many people rushing into the cities every year. 4. There are many things we can do to prevent traffic accidents. 5. There is no use holding back the wheel of history. 从以上例句还可看出，句中的主语后面可接多种修饰语，如介词短语、不定式短语、定语从句、分词短语等等。这无疑使该结构增加了表现力，使句子表达内容更加丰富。 在运用这一结构时，考生最容易犯的错误是在there be之后又用了一个动词作谓语，使句子结构出现严重错误。这里列举的考生的典型错误均属这种情况，对此我们在写作中要格外注意。 1) These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. （主题句）In my opinion, students should be educated to be aware of the importance of protecting the environment. At the same time, students can do some small things, such as turning off the lights, collecting used things for recycling and saving water. Always remember that it is everyone’s duty to protect the environment. Only when all the students are aware of that can we build a green school. 2) As we all can see,the phenomenon mentioned above has become a serious social problem we have to face.If we let it continue,it will do more harm to our society.So,in my opinion,it is high time that we took action together to solve this problem.Only when everybody can do so will we probably enjoy a better life. 11 假定你叫张华，你的同学李明即将去上海学习。现由你写一封便函给你们的朋友Jim，约他聚会。内容要点如下： （1）.聚会时间：本星期五下午3点30分； （2）.聚会地点：东风路225号，李明家。 （3）.按下图所画路线告诉Jim怎样去李明家。 注意： （1）便函用英语写，并注明便函的时间：2003年4月9日； （2）内容包括说明部分和要点； （3）字数：80－120 April 9th, 2003 Dear Jim, Our friend Li Ming will leave for Shanghai to study. So we are going to have a get-together at 3:30 this Friday afternoon. He lives at No.225 Dongfeng Street. It is not very difficult to find your way to his home. Take a No.2 bus, the stop of which is on the left of your university, and get off at the second crossing. There is a cinema across the street. Turn right at the corner, and you will find Dongfeng Street. Li Ming’s home is 200 yards down the street on the right. There is a post office opposite to Li Ming’s home. Yours, Zhang Hua 12 假如你是李明，你收到了美国朋友Robin的来信，他在信中说他将于6月3日和他妹妹到北京来看望你，对此你表示高兴和欢迎。但你碰巧要去珠海出席一个会议，无法接他们。为此，你向Robin深表歉意并在信中告诉他从机场到你家如何走，说明你家在403室，你母亲到时会在家中迎候他们，最后告诉他们你将于6月5日回京。 要求：1．短文必须包括文字说明的所有重点。 2．短文必须按图中所示的交通路线和交 通方式说明。 3．书信格式正确。 4．字数：100字左右。 One possible version: May 25,2004 Dear Robin, I'm very glad to learn from your letter that you and your sister will come to Beijing and visit me on June 3rd. But I'm terribly sorry that I can't meet you because I have to attend a meeting in Zhuhai. Now let me tell you the way to my house. When you get out of the airport, you can take Bus 359 to Dongzhimen. Walk across the flyover to the west until you see a bookstore on your right. Turn left there and go straight ahead. Then you can see a bank, and then a cinema on your left. The apartment building I live in is next to the cinema. Find Room 403 and my mother will be meeting you at home. I'll be back on June 5th. Best regards to you all. Yours truly, Li Ming 13 下面是光明中学的示意图。请根据示意图和图后的说明写一篇100词左右的短文，登到该中学的网页上。 方位指路、图表说明 地图/路线图的书面表达 1.Our school is located at(位于) the foot of a green hill. 2.In front of the school is a beautiful garden with a library on its left and a laboratory on its right. 3.Behind the garden is the classroom building. 4.At the back of the school are the students’ dormitory and the dinning-hall, in front of which lies the large sports field. 5.The teacher’s dormitory stands between A and B. 6.It is not very difficult to find your way from the Friendship Hotel to the station. 7.When you get out of the hotel, turn left and walk down the street until you see the traffic lights. 8.Turn right at the third crossing/turning, and you will see a post office at the corner. The museum is next/opposite to it. 9.Go straight ahead until you get to the end of the street. 10.Please get across the bridge and go eastward. 11.No.25 Bus will take you right there. 12.It will take you about 10 minutes to get there. 13.It’s about 10 minutes’ walk /ride from here. 14.The flat is made up of six rooms. When you go in , you’ll first see a large hall with a kitchen and a bathroom. The door on your left leads you to our living-room. Next to the door against the wall there is a sofa, in which we sit to watch TV every evening. On the opposite side stands a color TV set. On your left lies a set of bookcases, with all kinds of books in it. |
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