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作者：刘懿 My father is 40 now. He is a good driver and a good father. My father likes doing sport very much. Every morning, he gets up and runs in the People's Park. He also plays basketball. He is strong and healthy. He always says to me, "Sport can make us strong!" My father loves reading and his favorite book is Car Fanatics. He likes cars a lot. He wants to have an American car. It is his dream. I hope I can buy one for him in the future. I am his only daughter, and my father loves me very much. He buys me anything I want. When I make mistakes, he never hits me. He says to me with a smile, "Don't do that again!" We love each other very much. I hope my father can remain healthy forever! 简评：该文写得情谊浓浓，把父亲的爱好和父女之间的感情写得淋漓尽致。而且没有出现语法错误，但有些句子过于冗长。加以练习，相信会写出更好的文章。 |
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