原因 1. A number of factors might contribute to the phenomenon (problem). 2. The change in ...largely results from the fact that... (同谓语从句)
比较 1. The advantage far outweighs the disadvantages. 2. The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
批驳 1. There is really a lot of truth in these statements, but they ignore a more significant fact. 2. Too much stress placed on ... may lead to ... 后果 1. … may give rise to a lot of problems. 2. It will have a profound influence upon... 举例 1. I am speaking from my experience 2. Such examples might be given easily. 证明 1. No one can deny the fact that ... 2. There is sufficient evidence to show that ... 开篇 1. Many nations have been faced with the problem of ... 2. Recently the phenomenon has become a heated topic. 3. There is an increasing tendency that…. 结尾 1. From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that ... 2. In summary, if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue, more problems will crop up.
3. Whether it is good or not /positive or negative, one thing is certain/clear... 例文:(一) 在即将举行的中美高中生夏令营活动中,你和你的美国朋友将讨论学生中的“追星”问题,请你根据下面的提示写一篇发言稿。 追星表现 模仿衣着、发型、嗜好、举止等 追星后果 迷失自我、荒废学业等 你的看法 科学家等贡献最大; 应专心学习,成为有用之材 注意:1.根据要点可适当发挥但内容要连贯、完整。 2.词数:120左右。 3.文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 4.参考词汇:idol 偶像 Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, star-worshiping(追星) is popular among teenagers, especially many middle school students….
That’s all. Thank you.
One possible version: Ladies and gentlemen, Nowadays, star-worshiping(追星) is popular among teenagers, especially many middle school students. Thousands of fans are on fire for the handsome appearances, beautiful songs and perfect acting skills of their idols, and they imitate whatever stars do, including their clothes, hair style and hobbies. As a result, some of them forget what they should do and even spoil their study. In my opinion, having idols is not a bad thing. However, we should make it clear who are the real “heroes”. As far as I am concerned, the real heroes are those who are making the most contributions to our society, such as teachers, doctors and scientists. As young students we should learn from them. Only in this way can we become useful men and be real popular stars in the future. That’s all. Thank you. 点评:本篇文章充分的表达了文章要求和作者自己的意思,自由发挥得当。用到了下列结构: 连接词:and, however, as a result , in my opinion 高级词汇:be on fire for, make contribution to, learn from 复杂句型:whatever引导的名词性从句,as far as I am concerned,倒装句等结构。
注意:1.第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数。 2.词数120左右 3.参考词汇:媒介,中间人mediator In recent years, studying abroad has been popular…..
A possible version: In recent years, studying abroad has been popular.Tens of thousands of Chinese students have gone to foreign countries to study.Many people are trying their best to apply to go abroad. There are many advantages in attending schools abroad.First, students who have studied abroad can act as mediators between people of different cultures.Second, we can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries.Third, we can learn much foreign languages more quickly. However, there are some disadvantages.Most of the students are too young to live alone without any living experience.Besides, being far away from their home country, they may feel lonely and homesick.Also, of course, the costs are much higher there than at home.In spite of theses, advantages are more than disadvantages.In my opinion, it is advisable to attend schools abroad. 点评:本篇文章结构运用合理,完整的表达了题目的要求。 连词:however, besides, also, of course, 高级词汇:act as, try to do sth , advanced, in spite of 复杂句型结构:first, second, third; there be句型,too …..to…结构
(例文三)假如你是一位导游。通过观察游客的行为变化,说明大众环保意识日益增强。请根据下面表格的中文提示,写一篇短文谈谈此种现象 几年前某些游客的行为 现在大多数游客的表现 乱扔废物,如塑料带,罐头盒,费纸等。 随身带走垃圾。 乱刻乱画,攀树摘花。 爱护花木. 在林中吸烟,引起火灾。 林区不吸烟,以防火灾。 [写作内容] 1)请根据以上提示,谈谈这一现象,文章的开头已经给出。 2)文章必须包括所有提示要点,但不要逐条译成英语。 [写作要求] 只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确,信息内容完整和连贯。 With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection._____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【参考答案】 With the time on, there is an increasing tendency that more and more tourists have been paying greater attention to environment protection. However, several years ago, as we know, in the places of interest some tourists threw away rubbish here and there, such as plastic bags, waste paper, tins and so on. Besides, some of them climbed the trees, picked flowers freely and even marked their names on the plants. What’s worse, some of them lacked the sense of safety and smoked in the forest, by which the forest fire was caused. To our delight, in the recent years, great changes have taken place among the tourists who will take away rubbish with them when they leave. What’s more, they care the plants a lot and the smokers don’t smoke in the forest in&n