【参考例文】 It is reported that the French ear-maker Citroen has used the photo of the late Chinese leader Moo Zedong in the advertisement. This amused heated discussions among Chinese Internet users. According to a recent survey, about 45.3% of the people were against it while 41.6% of the people were for it. Only 13.1% of the people didn't express their opinions. In my opinion, it is wrong for Citroen to use Chairman Mao's photo to nm their advertisement. As we all know, Chairman Mao was a beloved leader in China. We think this action insulting to Chairman Mao the whole Chinese nation. China is a big auto market for Citroen. If the Chinese people are hurt by the ad, they won't buy Citroen cars in the future. What's more, from the business aspect, it is a violation of the rights of citizens. So this action is both politically and culturally unacceptable.
Recently a survey was conducted in Europe among elderly people over 60 years old. The topic is: What is the greatest regret? Here is the result. 72% regret they didn’t work hard enough when they were young while 67% think they choose a wrong career. 58% regret not having had enough exercise and 11% think they haven’t earned enough money. In my opinion, it is really true that the greatest regret is not working hard enough when one is young. When young, he is energetic and quick to learn. He should seize the golden chance or he will get nothing but regret when he is old, just as the Chinese saying goes.
直击09高考书面表达仿真模拟训练 3 某中学生英文报对是否该取消“五一”长假及其理由，在中学生中进行了问卷调查。调查结果如下： 赞成取消（24%） 不赞成取消（76%） 游客集中，交通拥挤。 景点污染，文物受损。 春暖花开季节，适合出游踏青，放飞心情。 促进旅游经济、商品销售业的发展。 Recently, we carried out a survey on whether the May Day long holidays should be cancelled or kept by means of questionnaire. The results are as fellows: About 24% of the surveyed people are in favour of the canceling. The defenders state that the May Day long holidays contribute to many problems. For a start, many tourists choose to travel during the long holidays; as a consequence, the traffic, whether the train or the plane, is very crowded, which, of course, brings a lot of inconveniences to the people who need to make regular trips. It is an accepted fact that every tourist attraction can only receive a certain number of visitors, but now with the tourists flowing in, the scenic spots are damaged and some cultural relics are ruined. Anyway, none of us, including the visitors, is willing to see the consequence. However, another 76% are strongly against the canceling. May is a good time for outing and to experience spring, so people need the long holiday. No one can deny that the tourism economy is promoted, especially sales of commodity in the tourism destinations. Maybe whether the May Day long holidays will be cancelled or kept depends on the government’s policy.
【精彩范文】 As we can see in the picture, a father is anxiously looking for his son addicted to online games. It seems that he has great trouble finding the boy because the street is full of cyber centers and he hardly knows in which one his son is enjoying games. Nowadays, more and more cyber centers are being opened under cover of improving intelligence. In reality, these are places where large numbers of teenagers run into online chat or games and can rarely be pulled out. In my opinion, serious measures should be taken to reduce the number of cyber centers as well as to help teenagers develop some other hobbies which do them good.
【参考例文】 As is known to all, there are many schools that have spent a great deal of money— several million or tens of millions— on a tremendous gate. People have different opinions about this. Some consider it worthy while some think it is a waste of money. As far as I am concerned, such an expensive gate is unreasonable. I’m firmly against it because millions of yuan are too much for a gate. The money from the students should be used on more important things. If I were a headmaster, I would use the money to help the poor students, to improve the teaching and learning conditions, to invite good teachers. The image of a school doesn’t come from a gate, but from good quality of students and teachers.
