逻辑角度 合适的过渡性词汇 时间顺序 first, second, then, just then, finally/at last, immediately, suddenly, soon, shortly after that, five minutes later, 空间顺序 here, there, on one side…on the other side, in front of, at the back of, next to 对称顺序 for one thing, for another thing；on one hand, on the other hand, similarly 转折顺序 but, however, while, though, otherwise, on the contrary 因果顺序 because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of), owing to, on account of, fortunately, 条件顺序 as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless 让步顺序 though, as, even if/though, who(what, when, where)-ever, no matter how…, in spite of 递进顺序 besides, what’s more, to make the matter worse, what’s worse, even, once more, in addition, 过渡性插入语 I think, I’m afraid, you know, believe it or not, to tell (you)the truth, As we all know, in conclusion, in a word, in general, generally speaking
范文欣赏 A.关于网络对学生的利与弊 With the development of computer technology, the Internet has become more and more popular. However, people also argue about whether it is good or not to go on the Internet. The students’ opinions differ as follows. On one hand, the Internet has its own advantages. It contains hundreds of thousands of websites where we’re able to gain varieties of information. Instead of spending much more time in the library, what we should do is to click the information we want. It does help save our precious time. Moreover, with the help of e–mail and ICQ, communication is becoming easier and more convenient.
On the other hard, the Internet has disadvantages as well. We’re sometimes confused by the harmful information. It’s quite difficult to keep it away. What’s worse, some students who lack self–control are so deeply absorbed in the computer games that they fail to study well. According to some medical studies, surfing the Internet too often is of no good to people’s health. Actually, there is some truth in the views mentioned above. Every one of us should try to tell apart the good and the bad, and then decide how to make full use of the Internet, a modern tool of high technology. (211 words) B.欢送外籍教师回国 Dear Mr. Smith, Today we all come to this party to bid farewell to you, our best teacher and friend. We know you have finished your work in our school and will return to London next week. On the eve of your departure, I’d like to express, on behalf of all the students present, our deepest gratitude and respect for your brilliant and tireless work. You are kind and easygoing, always treating us equally. But you are strict with us in our study and are also patient, always ready to solve our puzzles. Your classes are vivid and interesting and you never force us to learn passively. On the contrary, you encourage us to form our own ideas and express them in our own words. As a result, we all love your lessons and improve a lot in our English. We have spent many unforgettable days together in the past two years. We’ll always cherish them and miss you a lot. Let’s together wish you healthy and happy in the future and a pleasant journey home! Thank you. (178 words) C.学生帮助抓强盗 One day an old lady was walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand. Suddenly a young man riding a bicycle came up and snatched her bag. The old lady shouted: Help! and ran after him, however, she couldn't catch up with the bike. Just then a boy came out of school and saw what happened. Immediately he took out a box of push-pin and threw them on the ground. Just as the boy expected, the bike tyre were destroyed by the push-pins on the road and the young man had to stop. Finally they caught the young man and sent him to the police. What a clever and a brave boy! （115 words） 第二部分 书信通知类 No.1 假如你是陈华，你们学校附近几家小商店近期流行“校园彩票”。学生花五毛钱就可以摸一次奖，许多同学痴迷于此，有的省下生活费，甚至借钱去摸奖。 请你将以上现象向China Daily反映并从学校与政府两方面谈谈如何制止这种现象。 注意：1．开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词数； 2．词数：130左右； 3．参考词汇：彩票lottery ticket。 Dear Editor， Recently several small shops around our school have started a new business called “school lottery”. The lottery is becoming more and more popular． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Dear Editor， Recently several small shops around our school have started a new business called“school lottery”．The lottery is becoming more and more popular． Each lottery ticket costs five jiao and lots of students get addicted to this game．Some students use their money which should be spent on food to buy the tickets and some even borrow money to join in the chance game． In my opinion，it is necessary to take measures to stop the game on campus．On one hand，the school should explain the harmful effects of lottery to students and make rules to forbid students to buy lottery tickets．On the other hand，the local government should punish shop owners who carry out such business among students． If both the school and the government cooperate in fighting it, I think the school lottery activity will be effectively stopped． Sincerely yours, Chen Hua (133 words)
