———————————————————————————————————— 思路分析:本篇习作虽然要求写日记,但是日记的内容属于描写文。学生需要把和同学们到红星农场生态旅游的经过和感想描述出来。注意时态用一般过去时。 2. 参考范文: October 20 Friday fine Today my classmates and I went to Hongxing Farm for a wonderful eco-travel. First, I got up at 6:30 and we set off by bus. On the bus, we had a good time singing and enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Then two hours later, we arrived at the gate of the farm, where the farmers were waiting to give us a warm welcome. After we were shown around the big farm, we began to plant trees. It was really a good way to get close to nature and protect the environment at the same time. Next, we had a picnic and it was great fun to eat in the open air. Finally, we were on the way back. Although we were all very tired, our eco-travel was really unforgettable. 根据下面的内容写一篇日记,时间是12月27日(星期二), 天气为晴天。昨天你在电视上看了冬季奥运会,写下你的感想。 1. 比赛很激动人心,所有的运动队都很好。 2. 我国的滑雪队表现很出色。滑得快,跳得高,打败了法国队。夺得金牌。 3. 你也喜欢滑冰比赛项目(event): (1) 看到很多优秀滑冰运动员; (2)美国和意大利队都很优秀; (3)德国队的一名男青年摔断了腿; (4)一个美国的女运动员滑得很精彩,动作很优美。她最后出场,获得了金牌。
要求:字数100左右。
1. 参考范文: Dec. 27th Tuesday Fine Last night I watched the Winter Olympics on television. All the teams were good, and it was very exciting. Our ski team was excellent. They skied very fast and jumped very well. Last light the French team beat us, but this time we beat them. We won a gold medal. I liked the skating events too. I saw a lot of skaters. The American and the Italian teams were both excellent. A boy on the German team had a bad fall and broke his leg. A young American girl was excellent. Her back was straight; her arms were beautiful. She was the skaters and she won a gold medal. 2. 习作点评: 本文以日记的形式说明了昨天晚上的冬季奥运会情况,作出了评价,表达了感受,语言简练,内容充实。
2.生词提示:out-of-class activities课外活动step into society接触社会 1.思路分析: 此篇练习是根据已知图表向人介绍学校课文活动的开展情况,活动的时间,地点,内容,结果以及希望和建议都以图表的形式给出,作文时注意不要漏掉任何内容. 2.参考范文: Students in our school have two periods for out-of-class activities every week. It starts at 4:30p.m. and ends at 5:15p.m.every Tuesday and Friday. The activities include computer, sports, fine arts (or art), and oral English. These activities are often held in our classrooms, labs, school gardens or on the play-ground. We have learned a lot more through these activities, which makes us more interested in studies. We hope such activities will be held more often. We suggest that an “English Corner” should be set up. It is our suggestion that we should be allowed to step into society and know more about it. 观点对比
题目要求: 最近,你的父母打算让你出国留学,你与父母的意见相悖,感到烦恼.现在你准备在网上将你与父母的意见发表出来,寻求帮助.请你根据下面的提示,写出100词左右的短文.文章开头已给出. 父母的看法 自己的看法 1.拥有学习外语的好环境; 2.可以尽早学会独立生活; 3.学习先进技术,有前途. 自己现有的外语水平不高; 担心遇到无法处理的问题; 对家庭来说留学费用太高. My parents have been wanting me to study abroad, 1.思路分析: 拿到本题目之后,我们应该先分析此题的意图.要求写一篇短文寻求帮助,因此必须得把题目所囊括的内容陈述清楚,这里需要注意的是要在结尾寻求帮助.然后再根据表格内容写出所需要的词汇:limited, communicate, hard, deal with, cost, too much, independent, advanced knowledge, bright future……然后再进行组织写出提纲,可以第一段陈述自己的观点,第二段陈述父母的观点,最后提出寻求帮助.当然也可以先写父母的观点再陈述自己的观点. 2.参考范文: My parents have been wanting me to study abroad, but I don’t agree with them. I think my English is too limited to communicate with foreigners. And I’m not fully developed physically and mentally. So it would be hard for me to deal with the problems I’ll face. Besides, the cost will be too much for my family. However, my parents think that it’s natural to master a foreign language in an English-speaking country. Worse still, studying abroad at an early age will enable me to be independent. Then it would be easier for me to lean advanced knowledge and technology, which would prepare me for a brighter future. I really don’t know whether I should obey my parents or not. I need advice!
求职、应聘与推荐 假如你是陈峰,24岁,正在丹佛大学(Denver University)读书。你会弹吉它(guitar),擅长美国流行歌曲,会打篮球,游泳很好。参加过几所中学二日游活动,作辅导员(coach)。去年暑假在一所培训班教孩子们游泳,培训一个篮球队。你想在暑假期间申请(apply for)一份工作,在报纸上读到下面广告: Wanted: 80 Holiday Camp Assistant for USA Summer Camps Age 18—25 male and female Must be able to do at least some of the following: *play a musical instrument *sing *play baseball/ basketball/ volleyball *swim Work is offered during the following periods June 21—July 20; July 20—August 18; August 18—September 16 Experience preferred. Write, saying when you can work, and giving phone/ E-mail numbers to: Holiday Extra, PO BOX 2720, Denver, Colorado, USA 你喜欢这种工作,觉得有意思。 写信申请第二期工作。随信附上你的电话:66776226及电子邮件地址:Chenfeng@yeah.net. 注意:信的开头已给出,不计入总数。词数:100字左右。 Dear Sir or Madam, I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to … 1. 思路分析:这是一封书信,所以要注意书信的格式;而且要写清楚自己的况,尤其是对其要求比较符合的那几项;文章要包括所要求的所有要点,并加以组织;最后别忘记附上自己的电话和邮件地址。 2、参考范文: Dear Sir or Madam, I have read your advertisement for Holiday Camp Assistants and would like to apply for a job during the period of July 20 to August 18. I’m 24 years old, and now I’m studying at Denver University. I’m good at playing guitar and singing American pop music.